Talk:Aaron Hertzman/GA1
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 20:37, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
Will review this soon. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:37, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- Added GM cat.
- Removed American footbal executives cat. Already in subcats.
- Added WW1 cat.
- Added WWII cat.
- Does he not have a PFR exec profile? I couldn't find anything.
- I was thinking about asking you to expand the lead but I don't really think there's anything else to say that wouldn't be undue weight.
- Do you know what the Radcliffe Company is?
I think that's everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 21:51, 23 August 2024 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Unsure of what else to add to the lead as well – It seems PFR generally doesn't give profiles to defunct team managers (maybe I should contact them to fix it...). As for the Radcliffe Company, I see mentions of a "Radcliffe Land Company" in Kentucky around that time, but I don't see anything connecting him to it (besides the obit, which only states 'he was secretary of Radcliffe Co.'). Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:06, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
- I made a slight copy edit to the lead. Your responses make sense. That's everything. Passing the article. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 20:13, 26 August 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.