Talk:A Transfer/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:08, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- In the infobox, use "plainlist" instead of "<br/>" per the rules on the template. Done
- Is the "|story=Gainax" parameter necessary?
- A Transfer" → "A Transfer" Done
- What does "7.1% rating" mean?
- It means that 7.1% of Japan's televisions were tuned to Tokyo TV during the run. I took it for granted, given the percentage.
Plot
[edit]- The plot is 417 words, while it should be under 400 per WP:TVPLOT. Done
- Remove the comma after "poorly for Nerv".
- Removed.
Production
[edit]- What exactly is "a mount" within the context of the show?
- Specified.
Cultural references and themes
[edit]- The caption on the image should describe its significance within the article.
- Also improve the non-free use rationales of the images (see MOS:TVIMAGE for help).
- Hope it helps.
- "awkward communication. ... Evangelion" → "awkward communication [...] Evangelion"
- Fixed.
- "the sixties inspire" → "the 1960s inspired" Done
- Wikipedia doesn't normally use phrases like "he said" so try rewording the sentence. Done
- References should be included at the end of each quote, so recite certain sources. Done
- "A transfer" → "A Transfer" Done
Reception
[edit]- Again, explain what "7.1% rating" means and/or refers to.
- The second reference after "home video releases" is missing parts of its title. Done
- "as it shows" → "as it showed" Done
Notes and references
[edit]- Change the "Notes" header to "References", add a subsection titled "Citations" and make the original "References" section into a "Bibliography" subsection (example). Done
- Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool). Done
- Optional, but it helps readers if you link websites within the "|website=" parameter. Done
- @Some Dude From North Carolina:Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:49, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
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