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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 15:22, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
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- Will do. AryKun (talk) 15:22, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:26, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- You don't need to mention "posthumously", since both books were publishes after Tolkien's death.
- Removed.
- "The literary establishment was largely hostile to the book" You should mention that reception was only initially hostile.
- Added.
- "Hobbits" should be capitalized.
- Done.
- Images are appropriately used and properly licensed.
- Noted.
- The link for "'Rings' comes full circle". USA Today. is broken.
- Archived.
- Spotchecks:
- Ref 8: "In Memoriam: Jared Lobdell". Mythlore. 38 (1). verifies all claims made.
- Nagy, Gergely (2005). "The Road to Middle-earth, Revised and Expanded Edition (review)". Tolkien Studies. Project Muse. 2 (1): 258–261. Verifies all claims made.
- Bratman, David (2006). "The Year's Work in Tolkien Studies 2003". Tolkien Studies. Project Muse. 3 (1): 241–265. Verifies all claims made.
- Noted.
- That's all I have. AryKun (talk) 08:25, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:45, 1 August 2023 (UTC)
- Okay, will be passing. AryKun (talk) 10:47, 1 August 2023 (UTC)