Talk:A Simple Lie/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:46, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT. Done
• Lead summarizes the entire article and is in great shape.

Plot

• Add a comma after "death threats".
• "talks sense Frieda" → "talks sense to Frieda" Done
• "check the hospital security" → "check the hospital for security" Done
• "person taking" → "person from taking" Done
• Get each part of the summary to 400 words each (first is at 411 and second at 417). Done

Production

• "Steele told a Victoria" → "Steele told Victoria" Done
• "appear the show" → "appear on the show" Done

Promotion and broadcast

• Add commas after "However" and "the following days". Done
• "described as the move" → "described the move" Done

Reception

• This section looks good.

References

• References are archived.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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