Talk:A Rugrats Kwanzaa/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 14:53, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this article. Thank you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:53, 16 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

"during a visit from her great-Aunt". 'A' shouldn't be in caps for Aunt.

Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Tommy Pickles, Chuckie and Kimi Finster, and Phil and Lil Deville and family." There are three 'ands' in this sentence.

I do not think there is a way to get around the repetition of "ands". If I removed them, then I would have to repeat two last names (Finster and Deville) and I feel that would be more distracting. Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"learn about Kwanzaa from Aunt T. Susie". Why 'a' is in caps here? Or is it normal in American English? Pardon my ignorance.

Capitalizing familial titles is definitely not the norm in American English. The show is from the perspective of babies and toddlers, and they use "Aunt T" as the character's name. I have also gone according to the sources, which capitalize the character's name since it is used as her name for the show. Do you think adding a footnote or something like that would help to clarify this point? Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think that's necessary. Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink Nickelodeon in the second sentence of the second para.

Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Production

"Other guest appearances in the episode include Kevin Michael Richardson". The use of 'other' in this sentence is quite not clear to me. This section does not mention anything about guest appearances before this sentence.

The previous sentences mention Irma P. Hall who is a guest star on the show. If there is any way to clarify that, please let me know. Aoba47 (talk) 16:51, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I have revised the sentence somewhat to hopefully make it clear. Aoba47 (talk) 16:57, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sources

Mention the channel names in YouTube refs.

Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:57, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Aoba47 That's it from me. The rest looks fine. Great work on the article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:30, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. I believe that I have addressed everything. If there is anything else that I can do to improve the article, then please let me know. I hope you are having a great day so far! Aoba47 (talk) 16:57, 17 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It's a pass. Yashthepunisher (talk) 08:12, 18 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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