Talk:A Little Red Flower/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 21:48, 4 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"film directed by Han Yan, who co-wrote the film" film film repetitive.
"remission due to a" following (rather than due to).
"as a fellow brain tumor patient" not sure we need to repeat "brain tumor" in the same sentence, or if we do, somehow, do it without repeating.
Three para lead feels long for an article of this size.
"idea for the film arrived while" not great English, the idea came about or the idea for the film was conceived when... or something. But not the current wording.
" a set of films " would that even be a triptych?
"Production, along with filming began" comma after filming.
"billion CNY, setting" convert to a currency our readers can commonly associate with, e.g. $, or £ or €.
"be due to their" because of.
"a lake that he frequently hallucinates himself and an unknown girl playing at." needs copyedit.
"an "ordinary" Wei Yihang" what does "ordinary" mean here?
"a "12 bit 4:4:4 quality image"" what does this mean to non-experts?
" $39 million" what $?
"By its second," +weekend
"its #1 spot" number. Don't use WP:HASH for "number".
Ref 8 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.

Done except the "$39 million" comment which I do not understand. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:46, 8 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Is it US$ or some other $? The film isn't American, so I wondered which $ you meant. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 06:40, 9 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:26, 9 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]