Talk:A Little Kiss/GA1

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 14:49, 15 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article: Watch the contractions. I saw two 'can't's
Intro: No need to have references in the lead. I'd move [1] down to the "Reception" section
Production: Any info on who wrote the episode? Who directed?
Production: The section that begins "Although we take license for [...] keep those notes and comments coming!" needs a reference after 'coming!'
Production: The "Young and Rubicam protest incident" seems largely unsourced. If it is indeed based on Refs [4] and [5], at least add them to the end of each paragraph and at the end of every quote so we know where the info comes from
Reception: ""A Little Kiss" received very approving reviews from the television critic community. Many critics wrote openly laudatory reviews..." Kind of repeating the same idea in two back-to-back sentences.
Cultural References: This section is largely unsourced. It would also function better as prose rather than an ugly list. I'd move the bit on "Zou Bisou Bisou" to the production section about the song's performance, I'd move the "You Don't Have to Say You Love Me" to the production section about the other Dusty Springfield song, and finally, I'd find a citation for the Oscar Wilde quote.
~~References: Link "Entertainment Weekly"~~

Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:30, 15 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Problems have been sufficiently resolved. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:25, 22 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]