Talk:A Human Work

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Review: August 16, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from A Human Work appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 2 September 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the name of the robot Jet Alone, which first appeared in the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Human Work", is a reference to Jet Jaguar (also known as Red Alone) from Godzilla vs. Megalon?

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What's the name of the company that made Jet Alone? "Japan Heavy Chemical Industrial Cooperative"?--Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici 03:04, 24 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

This sentence is incorrect: "However, Misato realizes she entered the code too late and it should have exploded: it shut off on its own." Misato's code was rejected as incorrect, even though she tried several times. Her last recourse was to try to manually push the control rods back into the core to cool the reactor. Just as the core is reaching meltdown temperature, the system reboots (seen for a few frames on screen) and then the cooling rods insert themselves. 68.102.68.135 14:12, 3 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Then by all means change that sentence. --Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici 14:56, 3 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:49, 15 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be looking over this article.Tintor2 (talk) 20:49, 15 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

The lead seems well written but I would suggest adding an image to the infobox that is significant.

Plot

The Eva 01 needs a brief intro.
"The next morning, everything is back to normal at the Misato residence." Sounds a bit informal like a narrator. I would suggest something like "It was successful in the end".

Production

"Hito no, tsukurishimono" Is it possible to add a translit?

Reception

Theo Kogod (Comic Book Resources) should be "Theo Kogod from Comic Book Resources" to avoid making less importance.

That's all. Since the article isn't that big, there aren't that many issues. Nice work. @TeenAngels1234:.Tintor2 (talk) 02:48, 16 August 2021 (UTC) @Tintor2: Tried my best.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 12:16, 16 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Is it well written?
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D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
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Good job. Pass.--Tintor2 (talk) 15:03, 16 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: Good work

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:03, 27 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that the name of the robot Jet Alone, which first appeared in the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Human Work", is a reference to Jet Jaguar (also known as Red Alone) from Godzilla vs. Megalon? Source: Neon Genesis Evangelion Platinum Edition booklets, vol. 2
- ALT1:... that the Neon Genesis Evangelion episode "A Human Work" includes several tributes to Japanese director Kihachi Okamoto? Source: Yuichiro Oguro, "第39回エヴァ雑記「第六話決戦、第３新東京市」"

Improved to Good Article status by TeenAngels1234 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:49, 20 August 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: Recent GA article, sourced and no copyvio. Hooks are interesting and cited, assuming good faith on the Japanese article. The first hook was a little too long, so I trimmed it down. qpq not needed since the nominator has only 3 dyk credits. BuySomeApples (talk) 04:33, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

To T:DYK/P7