Talk:A Boy and His Blob: Trouble on Blobolonia/GA1
Appearance
GA Review
[edit]GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 12:30, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
This is one of those games I have never played yet but which is on my list of games I'll try to play somewhen in the future. This article is short; it won't be long until I finish the review. I will finish it in 3 days at most.
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- [1] is a blog, and I can't find its about page. It is better to replace it with a more reliable source.
- Done I've removed the last sentence and source, as it was not written by Kurt Kalata as per our list of reliable sources. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
- [1] is a blog, and I can't find its about page. It is better to replace it with a more reliable source.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- "lives at the top." - maybe just "life points"? "at the top" should be removed, as HUD is everytime at the top.
- Done I removed "at the top" but called them "extra lives" since "life points" would not be accurate (the player dies after one hit). ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
- "lives at the top." - maybe just "life points"? "at the top" should be removed, as HUD is everytime at the top.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- ISSN check: one broken
- Done ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
- Dabsolver check: ok
- Checklinks check: ok
- Reflinks check: ok
- "industry veteran" - why? how?
- Done Phrase removed. ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
- What does "three ways" in "However, the plans never came to fruition due to deadlines and difficulty in dividing production resources three ways" means?
- Done ~ Hibana (talk) 14:19, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
- Pass Good job!--♫GoP♫TCN 14:20, 13 November 2011 (UTC)