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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 17:55, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Let me know the comments! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 18:33, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Nice article. Here are my comments:

• Lead:

• joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% of the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace having the remaining 10% in the airline Better rephrase this as "joint venture with AirAsia Berhad holding 49% stake in the airline, Tata Sons holding 40.06% and Telestra Tradeplace holding the remaining 10%." Please check that the meaning is the same.Y
• What exactly is Telestra Tradeplace?Y
• Air Asia India commenced operations on 12 June 2014 with Bangalore as its primary hub. Would look better in first para.Y
• The company marked Tata's return to aviation industry after 60 years, having ceded Air India in 1946. Would look better in second para.Y

Sainsf, done!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 17:02, 28 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, Magentic Manifestations. Now, continuing with the rest of the article:

• History:

• foreign direct investment of up to 49% "in airlines"?Y
• with Tata sons "S"onsY
• ₹1.25 (1.9¢ US)/available seat kilometer "/" would look better as "per". "Kilometre" as per BE.Y
• The introduction of AirAsia was expected to By whom?Y
• an amount of US$50 million Could be converted to INR. (stated originally in US$, so did not convert)
• rent/lease aircraft The slash could be better replaced by "or".Y
• AirAsia India was established on 28 March 2013. AirAsia is the first foreign airline to set up a subsidiary in India. Can be combined.Y
• as its secondary hub Remove "as".Y
• after IndiGo and SpiceJet with "SpiceJet, with"Y

• Corporate affairs:

• founder of AirAsia group announced "group, announced"Y
• airline, however the latter refused "airline; however, Tata refused"Y
• Somewhere you say "chairman", elsewhere "Chairman".Y
• chief adviser "advisor" (BE)Y

• Destinations:

• If each entry has a source then what is ref. 29 for?(think, no harm in additional reference from airline website.)

• Fleet:

• Link Airbus.
• import 10 A320-200 aircraft Would be better to say "ten" here.Y
• AirAsia India on 21 March 2015 "On 21 March 2015, AirAsia India"Y
• and the is registered as VT-APJ Error?Y
• Honor --> Honour (BE).Y

• Sources:

• In ref. 18, the publisher is Anna.aero.Y

I think that should be it. These addressed, I would be happy to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 04:26, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Sainsf, done!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 07:35, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Very well, promoted. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 07:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)