Talk:ADAPT Act

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 3 April 2020 and 10 June 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dbortner.

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Critique

dbortner the article needs a lot more work "to work".

It needs trimming, as it is overly wordy and long. The style is often unencyclopedic.
The inverted commas need to be exchanged- all have been copied-pasted.
background section needs to be in chronological order.
the style of referencing is odd with raw links- Provelt is a very easy to use program which does it properly and automatically.
on a content level most importantly, it is extremely one sided, it needs more than primary sources --Wuerzele (talk) 20:52, 31 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]