Talk:A. P. J. Abdul Kalam/GA1

GA Review

Pass --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 16:06, 8 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 12:09, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Biography needs {{Persondata}}
- The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article. (Lead contains nothing about Future: 2020 and all)
- Wikilinks should only be made if they are relevant to the context. Common words do not need wikilinking.
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Comment

Sorry for delayed reply. Thanks Ankit for coming up and reviewing the nomination. Will you mind if you can let me know what are the necessary fixes I should work on the article? I believe that your review wasn't a detailed one and can be worked on after fixing few problems. -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 16:36, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Isn't it written under the Review section (Point 1)? --Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 15:06, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

In addition to the issues raised in Point 1 (and the peer reviewer), I have a few more suggestions:

Have worked upon the provided link, on whatever I could. -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 14:09, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

{{cn}} tags should be addressed or removed as appropriate
- Done -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 19:48, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
What makes this a reliable source?
- Removed it, adding new reliable sourced. -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 13:32, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Some general copyediting needed for grammar
- Done. Ssriram mt (talk) 04:32, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Issues with non-neutral/unencyclopedic tone - for example, "he had a discipline of starting the day at 4:00 am following the footsteps of his father"
- DoneRemoved it. Ssriram mt (talk) 04:32, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Criticisms need more citations
- DoneMore citations and also topic on mercy plea included.Ssriram mt (talk) 04:32, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps a bit overemphasis on frisking? Nikkimaria (talk) 20:49, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Seconded Nikkimaria.--Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 16:08, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Three incidents of national importance,so think needs to be retained - reworded some portions. Ssriram mt (talk) 04:32, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

My on-off Wiki status is probably delaying stuff's. Working on all these issues in a slow track. Thanks! -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 19:48, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Other potions of importance like interaction with students, visiting prof, integrated missile program have been expanded.

Add "popular culture" to the lead.--Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 12:03, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

DoneSsriram mt (talk) 23:50, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Carried out a second round of copy-edit, removed dubious references and streamlined some sections. Ssriram mt (talk) 23:50, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add "Controversies" to lead. Change ",and" to "and".--Ankit Maity ^Talk _Contribs 06:32, 7 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Good spot on the and, - have changed and also added the controversies part in the lead.

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