Talk:836 Naval Air Squadron

Suggestions for improvement

I have just completed the B class checklist and believe that this article could be improved by addressing the following issues:

• Referencing: each paragraph should have at least one in line citation for a succesful B class review;
• Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss notable actions or incidents, losses suffered, victories achieved, etc also it does not discuss when or if the squadron was disbanded;
• Structure: the article needs to have a defined structure including a concise introduction that summarises the entire article, followed perhaps by a history section and then other miscellaneous sections if appropriate;
• Grammar: is fine at the moment, but will need re-assessment if and when the article is expanded; and
• Supporting materials: the article could be improved by the addition of an infobox and some images - perhaps of aircraft operated.

Just a few ideas. Hope this helps. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 02:46, 8 April 2009 (UTC)