Talk:824th Tank Destroyer Battalion/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 04:08, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:08, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
- The Seventh Army: support Seventh Army
- Link Innsbruck, tank destroyer in the lede. Generally link on first appearance of a term.
- This article should be written in American English, so mobilized, not mobilised, etc.
Done. -ise(d) and armour(ed) fixed; can't spot anything similar.
- Need more details on how it was organized, both as a towed AT battalion and with the M18 Hellcats. You've given a rough manpower count early, which is good, but how companies did it have, and how many guns/Hellcats per company? Rough data should be in Zaloga.
- Lede still refers to them with towed 3-inch guns.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:14, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
- Done now, I think, for all three organisations. I couldn't find an explicit statement that they used the 1943 SP TO&E when converting back to M18s, but it seems a safe inference; the reconnaissance company definitely reappeared and Gabel doesn't mention any other organisational structure. Andrew Gray (talk) 15:35, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
- Rewrite this as it's too wordy: a group of eight men returned to retrieve them the following night, successfully recovering the guns.
- Don't capitalize surrender in Surrender of Japan
- Names of medal recipients unnecessary unless individually notable.
- Done I vacillated about this initially but included them mostly out of curiosity. Happy to remove them... Andrew Gray (talk) 19:58, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
- Fix the typo in Gimlette.
- Need place of publication for each book.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:30, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
- Done (except the AAR, not formally published) Andrew Gray (talk) 19:58, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
- Easy stuff done, rest to follow :) Andrew Gray (talk) 19:58, 17 April 2013 (UTC)