Talk:7 Summers/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this straight away! --K. Peake 16:15, 26 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wouldn't soft rock be more appropriate than easy listening under genres in the infobox per the comp section?
"and Josh Osborne and it" → "and Josh Osborne, and it" but write this out in the body in prose since everything in the lead has to be
"on the album however following a demo version of the song" → "on the album however, following a demo version"
"he decided to include it on the album." → "he decided on inclusion."
Change to second single because otherwise it implies a different type
Why is soft rock listed as an influence when the body sources it as a genre?
"Wallen sings of a lost love of his and" → "Wallen sings of his lost love" also, the title suggestion is not directly sourced in the body
"7 Summers received generally positive reviews" → ""7 Summers" received positive reviews" per the body
Add a comma after music critics
"Moi's production and the overall mood of the track." → "Moi's production, and its overall mood."
Italicise Time and change 7th to seventh per MOS:NUM
"The song debuted number one" → "The song debuted at number one" plus this needs to be written out in the body
"after Garth Brooks (under the persona of Chris Gaines) did so in 1999." → "after Garth Brooks did so as Chris Gaines in 1999."
Write the certification out in prose, also add sentences for the short film and the live performances

"by soft rock bands such as" → "by soft rock bands such as the" on the img text with the wikilink
"and bittersweet quality in the song that would" → "and bittersweet quality that would"
"chords,[5] and layered guitars meant to give the song a maximalist element," → "chords,[5] layered guitars meant to add a maximalist element,"
"groove" and a "breezy," → "groove", and a "breezy,"
"are "nostalgic" "bittersweet" "wistful"" → "are "nostalgic", "bittersweet", "wistful","
"from East Tennessee (Wallen)"" → "from East Tennessee", referring to himself."
"indicating that a second chance with" → "indicating a second chance with"

"on August 14, 2020 as" → "on August 14, 2020, as"
This sentence is quite messy; italicise the album title, mention the release date separate for when it was released not the song and add the refs for all the info
"Upon its release the song gained" → "Upon its release, the song was met with"
"pack a gentle wallop"." → "pack a gentle wallop."" per MOS:QUOTE
"Allie Clouse of The Knoxville News Sentinel deemed it" → "Allie Clouse of the Knoxville News Sentinel deemed the song"
"would described the song as "having imagery" → "described the song as having "imagery"
Remove the introduction to Moi
Last para looks good!

Img looks good!
"with Wallen fearing that" → "while he fears that"
"In the film after failing to make the big leagues Wallen" → "In the film, after failing to make the big leagues, Wallen"
"to community college and by Wallen reminiscing" → "to community college, as well as by him reminiscing"
"and the cinematic nature of the film." → "and its cinematic nature." but is three refs enough for this?
"tease Wallen's upcoming second studio album (Dangerous: The Double Album), with Wallen stating" → "tease Dangerous: The Double Album, with him stating"
"a January 8th, 2021 release," → "a January 8, 2021 release,"
For the last para, [19][20] should only be invoked at the end

"on the Global Apple Music chart." → "on the global chart."
"at number six on the" → "at number six on the US"
The Voice part is not sourced
"at #3 on the Rolling Stone Top 100," → "at number three on the Rolling Stone Top 100," with the pipe per MOS:LINK2SECT
"Wallen's first single to" → "becoming Wallen's first single to"
"driven by social media and" → "driven by TikTok and"
The move country forward quote is not sourced and if you can, italicise the Los Angeles Times

The source/title describes Wallen as moving Country into the 21st century while primarily focusing on the song.

Retitle to Live performances
"Wallen performed the song on Saturday Night Live to" → "Wallen performed the song on his Saturday Night Live debut to" per the source
Either remove the "promote the album" part or add that he performed it along those other tracks
"In his 2022, The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the 5th song" → "In his 2022 The Dangerous Tour, the song would typically be the fifth one" per MOS:NUM

Retitle to Credits and personnel
Remove or replace Genius per WP:RSP (you are citing a lyrics page)
Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between credits and personnel

Copyvio score looks somewhat high at 48.5%; cut down direct quoting to address this
Remove amp from all URLs using it
Music Mayhem → Music Mayhem Magazine on ref 2 and fix MOS:QWQ issues
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 4 and 28
Wikilink Los Angeles Times on ref 6
Wikilink Taste of Country on ref 8 per MOS:LINK2SECT
What exactly makes ref 9 a reliable source? If justified, fix MOS:QWQ issues.

Replaced Source

Holler Country is a fairly large digital Country Magazine that has a full editing team and regularly breaks news

I included this to support the song being considered one of his best. I can remove it you feel it is unreliable

WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 21
Cite last name followed by first and pipe Variety to Variety (magazine) on ref 24
Wikilink TMZ on ref 25
Fix MOS:QWQ and MOS:CAPS issues with ref 26
Remove the author and GlobeNewswire News Room → GlobeNewswire on ref 27
Wikilink The Hollywood Reporter on ref 29
What exactly makes ref 30 a reliable source? If kept, cite The All-New 98.9 THE BULL as publisher instead and fix MOS:QWQ issues.

It's the radio station he did the performance on

Done

Done

On hold until all of the issues are fixed; the sources are the main problem here. --K. Peake 20:01, 26 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake I believe I have fixed everything, let me know if I missed anything. Newtothisedit (talk) 03:05, 27 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Pass now, everything has been covered properly here! --K. Peake 07:19, 27 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]