Talk:7 Khoon Maaf/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GleekVampire (talk · contribs) 09:49, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

I will review this Good Article nomination. Nominators please be prepared to answer queries raised in the review. —GleekVampire | talk! 09:52, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

External links

• Let's start with some problematic External links as per the tool. There are redirects and dead links, please correct them first. —GleekVampire | talk! 10:13, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

 Done: All the references are working.Prashant talk 03:44, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• ... is a 2011 Indian black comedy drama thriller film ... --> Remove 'drama thriller film'.
• The film was scheduled for release on 21 January 2011, but was postponed a month to avoid conflicting with another UTV film --> Which UTV film? Also, couldn't find a source to support the claim in the marketing and release section.

 Done

• Despite good reviews 7 Khoon Maaf was unsuccessful at the box-office, but earned a total of 33 crore (US$6.0 million) for its box-office run and television-music-home-video rights against a budget of 15 crore (US$2.7 million). --> Remove 'despite good reviews'; The sentence should read, "7 Khoon Maaf was unsuccessful at the box-office, 'earning' a total of ... 'but' is not required in the sentence.

 Done

Plot

• Remove the non-free image
• Combine the 3rd and 4th paras as well as the 5th and 6th

 Done

Production

• The first paragraph lacks enough sources, there is excessive WP:QUOTEFARM in the section. Some of the quotes can be paraphrased.

Well, I don't think so. Seeing the article size, it may contain as many as quotes required. These quotes are details of the developments. So, they are fine.Prashant talk 18:17, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

My word is final. Some quotes in the first paragraph can easily be paraphrased or shortened. If you don't know how to do it then get someone else to do it for you. —GleekVampire | talk! 13:15, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

• In late 2010, Konkona Sen Sharma was confirmed for a cameo appearance. --> Late 2010? The date on the reference article is July 2010. How is July late? Just write 'Later that year or In July 2010'

 Done

Will continue later. —GleekVampire | talk! 13:13, 24 April 2013 (UTC)

Soundtrack

• Looks okay, but the qoute from Bollywood Hungama is too long, shorten it

 Done

Marketing and release

• 7 Khoon Maaf was originally scheduled for release on 21 January 2011, but was postponed a month to avoid conflicting with another UTV film --> Which UTV film? and why haven't you cited a source for this?

 Done

Reception

• Again, the quotes in the first paragraph are too long, shorten them

 Done.Prashant talk 18:19, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

Enough for now. Back later —GleekVampire | talk! 13:15, 25 April 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail: