Talk:75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Phlsph7 (talk) 10:27, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Phlsph7 (talk · contribs) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Pharaoh496 and thanks for almost single-handedly writing this article. Unfortunately, about half the content in the body of the article is unreferenced. Examples are the paragraphs starting with "Foreign diplomatic relations between Australia and India are well-established", "PM Albanese visited India in March 2023. During the visit, he also led a trade delegation", and "In 1996, the Border-Gavaskar Trophy was created, a test series". This fails the GA criterion 2b, which states that text in the body of the article should have citations no later than the end of the paragraph. This should be addressed before a renomination. A few other observations:

Ideally, the first sentence should start with a definition, see MOS:LEADSENTENCE. It could start with "75 Years of Friendship through Cricket Event was an event..." or something similar.
Why does every single picture have Modi and Albanese in it? More variety would be better.
In first innings Usman Khawaja and add "the" before "first" and add a comma after "innings"
In the first innings, Shubman Gill and a little repetitive since the sentence before the previous sentence starts the same way
respectively, In result Australia the comma should probably be a period

Phlsph7 (talk) 10:26, 13 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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