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GA Review

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:55, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Production

1. Since The A.V. Club is the only outlet that described the episodes as a "three-part third-season finale," the implication that "some" outlets referred to it as that seems a bit confusing.

Ratings

1. "with a 1.2/4 ratings share 18–49." Slightly clumsy. You need to address that 18-49 refers to the demographic's age.
2. "This was 14 percent fewer viewers than the previous week," "This was" sounds a bit clunky to me. You can replace it with "It was seen by," for example.

In conclusion

And that's pretty much it, only three minor issues and it's ready for GA. I'll put the article on hold for seven days. Good luck! Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:55, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

All fixed. Thanks again for the review! Much appreciated, Ruby2010 comment! 19:24, 11 June 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Passed! Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:29, 11 June 2011 (UTC)