Talk:65 Broadway/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:27, 12 May 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

1. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Review

Lead

• of the firm of Renwick, Aspinwall & Tucker, did you mean that second of?
  •  Fixed

Description

• Why is Facade wikilinked so far down when it's mentioned earlier?
  •  Fixed
• there are three. Please capitalize There
  •  Done

History

• Are three references needed to verify the sentence American Express was started as an express mail business in 1850?
  •  Removed one
• Plans for a new headquarters building at 63-65 Broadway were announced in March 1914.[31] American Express president George Chadbourne Taylor had devised the idea for the new headquarters. could be combined into one sentence
  •  Done
• Are three references needed to verify the sentence The revised plans, announced in February 1916, called for a 15-story structure that would be occupied entirely by American Express.
  •  Removed one

References

• References #7, #8, #9, #14, #15 need authors
  •  Done @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of the above issues. epicgenius (talk) 13:32, 13 May 2020 (UTC)

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