Talk:5 Beekman Street/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:37, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

NYCL registration number needs cited.
- Done
Maybe add in that it's a contributing property somewhere? There's a way to do it as sort of a banner bar, see Mathew H. Ritchey House for an example
- Done

Site

You list 3-9 Nassau street as alternate addresses here, but the infobox says 3-9 Beekman street
- Fixed That was a typo. 3-9 Nassau would place it here. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Design

"Two pyramidal towers on the northwest and northeast corners, as well as an annex on the southern side, contain a tenth floor" - Not seeing this in the source
- Fixed I used the wrong source. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The original building has vertical ten Bays on Nassau Street" - Don't capitalize Bay
- Fixed And in that same sentence, there is a wording mixup. I fixed that too. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History

"The Nassau National Bank Upon Silliman's 1901 death, American Architect and Building News called the building "popular and profitable" - It honestly looks like you started to say something about the Nassau National Bank, but didn't make it further than the first four words
- Fixed I removed the fragment about the bank, which seems to be. I dunno why, but I evidently forgot to proofread it. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
What happened to the building between 1915 and 1942? That's a big gap
- Not much happened. It was held by the same owner, and a few tenants moved in, but there was nothing big such as a renovation or renaming. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"The property's mortgage was held by the Emigrant Industrial Savings Bank, which took over the building in 1942." - By the bank taking over, is this meaning it was foreclosed on?
- Yes. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
What's the exact date of the NRHP contributing property listing? Only the year is given
- Added
" film shoots for crime TV series such as White Collar," - Maybe it's just my system, but White Collar is perpetually underlined for me, which doesn't seem to make much sense
- Fixed No, it was not just your system. The markup was strangely including underlines as well. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"the last two events to take place in the building was H&M's fashion show in October 2012 and Proenza Schouler's fashion show in September 2013" - Were, not was
- Done
" By October 2017, all except nine of the condominiums had been sold" - Anything happen after this point? It's only three years, but it's still possible something has occurred of note with the building
- Well, the penthouse has recently found a buyer, so I added that fact. Currently, there are 14 active listings in the building, but I'd rather not include this, as it would go against WP:NOTGUIDE. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Referencing looks fine, except for the one failed spot check above, all of the other spot checks were clean. Image licensing looks correct. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 17:51, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hog Farm: Thanks for the review and for your patience. Had I seen these errors earlier, I would've fixed them before nominating the page! I've addressed all these now. epicgenius (talk) 18:50, 16 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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