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575 (song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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April 20, 2016	Good article nominee	Listed

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 01:23, 13 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

If this article is written in British English, which it seems to be, you must list the date as 14 July 2010 instead of July 14, 2010

Lead

The lead looks fantastic!

Background and composition

Paragraph 1

You used "alongside" back-to-back twice, so I would try to think of a better word choice
What does it mean to have "partial rights" through a music corporation? Could you rephrase this as well please

Paragraph 2

Add "a" before "majority of the song, the girl's vocals..."
What is a/who is "Asian Junkie"? Couldn't you just say "Japanese editor Random J reviewed the album..."?

Critical response

Since you used "favourable" here, you either need to change the date in the infobox to what I suggested earlier or change to "favorable" please
Again: "What is a/who is "Asian Junkie"? Couldn't you just say "Japanese editor Random J reviewed the album..."?"
There is a link to the article "Macaroni" that you are missing; please link and include this
Change to "gave the song a mixed review; despite his appreciate of the slow..." please
Change to "second half of the album and felt these factors..." please

Commercial performance

Ruled by who?
Change to "It peaked at number 73 on Billboard's Japan Hot 100 chart and is the highest charting non-single track from JPN." please
Change to "It then charted on the now defunct RIAJ Digital Track Chart, peaking at number four and was the group's highest charting single on there." please; the discontinuation of the chart at the end is not necessary and should be moved towards the beginning of the statement/sentence
Ownership of "sales": "the song's overall sales to 200,000 units.[13][14]"

Promotion and live performances

Could you add a topic sentence to introduce this section?
Remove "had" before "performed a cover version of the song..." please
Change to "The performance included the girls dancing around geometrical shapes and was positively received from music critics. Yuki Sugioka from Hot Express complimented the girls performance, alongside the stage production of the segment." please
If there's a music video available for this track, shouldn't it be included further in this article?
Ownership of "groups": "the group's 180 Gram vinyl compilation box set..."
Is the mention of "180 Gram vinyl" necessary? I think it would work just as well with "the group's compilation box set..." What do you think?

Track listing

Since "575" was only released as a song/track, and not a single or promotional single, this section is not necessary and should be removed

Credits and personnel

Instead of mentioning "the parent album", please actually state the album's title instead

Release history

The "Japan" region could be condensed using a "rowspan" template
The "Tokuma Japan Communications Universal Music Japan" could be condensed using a "rowspan" template as well

End of GA Review:

A rather short, but expertly written article. However, this article includes no pictures–I would suggest adding a picture somewhere (one would do well in the "Promotion and live performances" section of the article). Let me know what you decide to do while the article is placed on hold for seven days to allow for changes. Thank you! Carbrera (talk) 02:05, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Done and dusted! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 04:59, 19 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have passed the article, great work! I love seeing your passion come alive in these articles! Carbrera (talk) 00:50, 20 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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