Talk:53rd Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:09, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Infobox:
- Zip code ref?
  - Done epicgenius (talk) 23:52, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Bus ref?
  - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Rank ref?
  - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"a few " doesn't seem particularly encyclopedic.
- Removed
"and subsequently modified" relevance?
- Removed
"n June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"June 18, 1906 after " comma after 1906.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"plan for the line in October and November 1907" approved in two separate months?
- Reworded
"As part of negotiations" sentence has " and ... and ..." which is a little clunky.
- Fixed
"was recommended. This recommendation" repetitive.
- Removed
"its Chief Engineer" no need for caps?
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"contracts for ... was awarded " were?
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Could link BMT Sea Beach Line?
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"on June 22, 1915 as" comma after 1915.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"53rd Street opened" ->" The 53rd Street station....
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"$633,000" etc, inflate.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"85 feet (26 m)[13] to the south,[16] " -> "85 feet (26 m) to the south,[13][16] "
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"2015—2019 " should be an en-dash, not an em-dash.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"March 27, 2017 for " comma after 2017.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
" reopened on September 8, 2017,[25] ahead of schedule.[26]" -> " reopened ahead of schedule on September 8, 2017.[25][26]"
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In the Station layout, 45th and 59th Street are overlinked.
- @Epicgenius: Could you fix this when you have a chance? Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
As is side platform.
- @Epicgenius: Could you fix this when you have a chance? Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  - Done epicgenius (talk) 16:40, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"and a few rush-hour " see before.
- Removed
"were installed.[citation needed]" speaks for itself.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"mosaics[26]" move ref to end.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
" Brooklyn Daily Eagle" is a newspaper, should be in italics.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Check for consistent link of publishers (e.g. MTA is sometimes linked) in refs.
- - Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:41, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 15:39, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, thanks for the comments. I think Kew Gardens 613 has done most of these. I have done the station layout queries. Can I ask that you hold off on promoting for a few days (at least until he comes back)? I would like to nominate these all as part of a single DYK. epicgenius (talk) 23:11, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Due to Passover, I won't be able to do any editing from tonight until Thursday evening at the earliest. I am still committed to addressing your concerns with the article. Thanks for your patience and stay safe.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:15, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
No problem at all. Chag pesach sameach, and stay safe too. See you when I see you. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 06:38, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Kew Gardens 613, let me know when you're good for a re-review. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:13, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Kew Gardens 613: would you be fine if TRM did a re-review? epicgenius (talk) 23:52, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Absolutely! Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 10:13, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, I think all of the issues have been resolved here. Have you had a chance to look at the 59th Street station page yet? epicgenius (talk) 16:35, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Happy with this, so promoting. No, I haven't looked at 59th yet, but I plan to get onto it soon. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 18:52, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]