Talk:500 Park Avenue/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments

"similarly to the" → "similar to the"
"reaches to the curb" → "reaches the curb"
Remove the comma after "from the 1980s".
"nearly-full-height" → "nearly full-height"
"different stories of building" → "different stories of the building"
Remove the hyphen between "anodized-aluminum".
"guiderails" should be two words.
"soffit which extends" → "soffit that extends"
"empty space" sounds weird. Both words basically mean the same thing.
"partitioned hall was" → "partitioned hall were"
"similar to in the" - reword.
Remove the comma after "Great Depression".
Remove the comma after "move to the Pepsi-Cola Building".
"had a large amount of" → "had a number amount of"
"through third floors" - reword.
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Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 22:21, 2 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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