Talk:4th Pennsylvania Infantry Regiment/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:45, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

1.

Link Colonel to Colonel (United States)

Done

Can we get McDowell's rank in the lead? I've taken several Civil War battle articles through GAR, and it's a frequent request to include ranks.

Done

"Engagements American Civil War" - This parameter is usually used to list battles, not the overall war

Done

" United States Army

Union Army" - Do both of these need listed in the infobox? It's a touch redundant

Only Union then, after all they were volunteers and not regulars

Link the Odd Fellows

Done

Link Harrisburg

Done

Link the various ranks in the formation article to the articles specifically for that rank in the US Army.

Done

Don't need to ink Montgomery County in the table, it's linked in the text paragraph above it

Done

Link companies at first mention in the text

Done

Consider linking Philadelphia, I don't know how well known this is internationally. Same with Baltimore

Done

Link steamer

Done

Link 2nd Lieutenant. Also, go ahead and spell out Second, because it seems to be spelled out more in military sources, unless the abbreviated 2nd Lt. is used

Done

Link Confederate at first mention

Done

Link Brigadier General to Brigadier General (United States)

Done

"In the preliminary movements of the First Battle of Bull Run, the division left camp on the Old Fairfax Road, arriving at Sangster's Station late on 18 July" - I'd consider linking to the campaign rather than the First Battle of Bull Run here, as the campaign is more the topic than the battle in the march to Centreville

Done

2.

Refs 6 and 9 need via parameters for newspapers.com

Done

3.

Do you think it would be appropriate to include a couple sentences towards the beginning about the start of the Civil War?

Have added a brief mention of Fort Sumter

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That's it for the first go-over, I'll give it another look after these are responded to. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 04:11, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Passing. Hog Farm (talk) 16:27, 5 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]