Talk:4th Infantry Brigade (New Zealand)

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Military history: South Pacific / World War I / World War II

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Referencing and citation: criterion met Coverage and accuracy: criterion not met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion met Supporting materials: criterion met

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Except for one problem, this is a well-written B-class article. However, the lead paragraph mentions service in WW2 and the section on WW2 is virtually empty (Content, Structure). My recommendation is to limit the article to the WW1 unit by changing the title and removing all references to the WW2 unit. I'm sure a separate, wonderful article could be written about the exploits of the WW2 unit (North Africa, Italy). If you decide to follow my suggestions, please let me know and I will rerate the article. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 22:40, 10 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The alternative would be to include the WW2 material, but I suspect that would be a lot more work. Djmaschek (talk) 22:55, 10 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]