Talk:4 in the Morning/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 05:32, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

I am reviewing this article. Comments may arrive after three days. Simon (talk) 05:32, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

GA review

Lead

• "consisting in" → of  Done
• "their love" → "her love" is more preferable here  Done
• "however" → semi-colon or full stop  Done
• "charting inside the top 20" → reaching the top 20  Done

Background

• The caption of the sample is not a sentence, so the full stop is redundant here  Done
• "starting" → from  Done
• "the song has as its main instrumentation..." → problem  Done
• "having a midtempo beat" → separate this into an independant sentence  Done

Critical reception

• This section seems a bit overquoted. Try to paraphrase some reviews.  Done

Commercial performance

• "The song was more successful outside North America" → seems a bit incomplete. I suggest it be merged with another sentence  Done
• "... However, it was her lowest..." → This sentence does not contrast with the information given beforehand  Done
• "somewhat better" → "somewhat" is redundant  Done

Credits

• Again, that is not a sentence  Done

Enough at this point — Simon (talk) 12:10, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

I made your suggested changes; thanks once again! Carbrera (talk) 04:07, 22 March 2016 (UTC)

Passing this article. Great job! Simon (talk) 10:37, 22 March 2016 (UTC)