Talk:45th Street station (BMT Fourth Avenue Line)/GA1

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:37, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Last three sentences of the lead all begin with "The station". Maybe change it to some other phrase?

"The station was also renovated in 1970." Renovated in which way?
- Not really much to say: the tiles were changed and the platforms were extended. The first part was common for renovations of that time, but the second part is quite unique. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 8 doesn't say that the approval was from Appellate Division of the Supreme Court of New York, unless I missed something.
- Removed
Ref 9 needs page numbers.
- Done
Ref 10 needs |via=Newspapers.com.

"490 feet (150 m) to 530 feet (160 m)" Ref 12 says 495.
- Done
Ref 13 needs |subscription=yes.
- Done
Ref 15 needs date format fixed.
- Done
"in preparation of the construction of platform extensions" This should belong at the end of the sentence.
- Done
"8-by-16-inch (200 by 410 mm)" Would centimeters be a better choice?
- Done
Shouldn't the 1970 renovation belong in the same section as the other renovations?
- It was the same as the 1968-1970 renovation which already is in the history section. I will fix that shortly. epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I would put the reference for each service right next to the service mentioned (after the punctuation), instead of putting all of them at the end of the sentence.
- Done epicgenius (talk) 13:42, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 29 needs date format fixed.
- Done

FYI, I am aware of that epicgenius will be fixing parts of the article while you're still observing Passover, Kew Gardens 613. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:53, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Nova Crystallis: I am available again so I can address any other outstanding issues. Thanks for taking this up.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 23:35, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]