Talk:3rd Brigade, 7th Infantry Division (United States)/GA1

GA Review

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• Most of the comments from the 2nd Brigade apply here.
• Watch your copy-paste! Fix the paragraph about the Rodney King Riots. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:15, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. -Ed!^(talk) 02:33, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

I tried to fix some of the issues in the last paragraph, but it's still not clear enough, IMO, because I don't know the actual history. There's some confusion with tenses and stuff regarding the BRAC plan for the division and what actually happened. I think that the 2nd and 3rd Brigades formally deactivated in 1993 at Ft. Ord, while the division deactivated later. Is that correct? If so please clarify that in the article. Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:05, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

What about now? -Ed!^(talk) 17:25, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Still like to see OB listings at various times. Also exactly when did the brigade deactivate?

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail: