Talk:32 Avenue of the Americas/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 30 April 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

1. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall: Pass

   Pass/Fail:

Review

Facade

• above a set of bronze doors. should have a citation at the end
  •  Done It is the same citation. epicgenius (talk) 20:03, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
• The original building mainly contains a red-and-brown brick facade should add "of" before the a
  •  Done with some rewording. epicgenius (talk) 20:03, 30 April 2020 (UTC)

Telecommunications

• Please Wikilink Bell System
  •  Done

References

• Reference #24 leads to an article titled "DETECTIVE ARRESTED IN SUIT FOR $100,000; James T. Brady of Lahey's Staff Accused of Blackjacking a Warehouseman," not Telephone Moving Day.
  • This is the same PDF, but occasionally comes up with the wrong article title. "Telephone Moving Day" is further down in that document. I've fixed it. epicgenius (talk) 20:03, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
• Reference 33 needs an author (Paul Crowel)
  •  Done
• Reference 36 needs a Retrieved date
  •  Done
• Reference 41, 54 says "Archived from the original" but doesn't link the original
  • This is because |url-status= is set to unfit. This is used when the original page can't be linked here because (1) it is not dead but leads to something different, or (2) it is inappropriate for inclusion here, such as hijacked websites. epicgenius (talk) 20:03, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
• Reference 49 needs an author
  • The author is Dow Jones, which isn't really an author. epicgenius (talk) 20:03, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
    • . HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:13, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
  • @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Thanks for the review. I have addressed all of the points above. epicgenius (talk) 20:04, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
    • Epicgenius, ✓ Pass. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:13, 30 April 2020 (UTC)

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