Talk:2024 Indian Premier League/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 11:13, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 09:05, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this one. Expect initial remarks in 24-48 hours. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 09:05, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

Before I start reviewing, I see that you are only the 7th biggest contributor, with less than 10% authorship, and nothing on the article talk page about you nom-ing it, which isn't good. Remember for next time you are nom-ing something for GA.

Statistics and Awards

• All good (though can make the Most Boundaries heading only have line- Total Sixes- 2174, instead of newline, and similiar for fours)(not necessary for GA, will just make it look better)

  @DoctorWhoFan91: How about the format used on this page? Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 11:53, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Umm, no. Shudders. Even leaving it as is would be better than this format. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:58, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Playoffs

• Add sources for the "qualified for the final for the nth time"? (I'll have to check though if the statement might not be WP:OR)  Done

Lead

• Add '.' between "League" and "The tournament"
• Mention that Chennai is starting and ending venue bcs they won last year

   Done

Background

• Clarify that 2008 was also the first edition
• Format- CE first sentence, weirdly worded, and explain how the "change in group order was done"- randomly, or by some rule?
• mention the playoff is a type of Page playoff system
• Schedule- Mention the election and the possibility of being held abroad, before the confirmation it'll be held at home
• Mention due to being last year's winners for Chennai again
• Expand marketing.
• Expand broadcasting

  All done, except Marketing & Broadcasting - because, they have literally nothing else to be expanded with... Which is why instead of their own separate section, they are kept as sub-sections. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 12:52, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Broadcasting- mention that's it's second year of the deal of this many $, after viewership etc levels last year? And for Marketing- other brands must have advertised too, and even the sponsors would have put out advertisements? DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 16:08, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

  Unfortunately, there aren't enough WP:RS covering those, I will add what I can find. Vestrian24Bio (TALK) 17:11, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

Teams

• Add comma between returned and with  Done

Will review the rest of the article later, Vestrian24Bio. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:42, 18 October 2024 (UTC)