Talk:2022 Tour Championship/GA1

GA Review

Passed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 17:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 12:37, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Copyvio check. I reviewed all matches over 5% found using Earwig's Copyvio Detector. No concerns.
Images are appropriate. Licences, captions and positioning all OK. Optionally: MOS:ALT says "All readers will be aware this element is an image, so adding 'photograph of' isn't usually necessary" - so "photo of" could be removed from the O'Sullivan and Williams alt text.
There are a few duplicate links.

Format

"was the third and final event in the 2021–22 Cazoo Cup series", "first introduced in the 2018–19 snooker season", "the other events in the series were the World Grand Prix and the Players Championship" - not verified by cited source.
- Added additional cites. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"it was the 15th and penultimate ranking event of the 2021–22 snooker season, following the Gibraltar Open and preceding the World Championship." - the source has a lot of TBC's on it, can an updated source be used?
- To be fair, it's only the venues that were to be confirmed, the dates and order were confirmed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Three sources for "it was sponsored by car retailer Cazoo" seems like overkill, but not a blocker to GA status.
- I don't think it quite meets WP:OVERCITE, but I can remove one if you mind.
"The participants were determined by the points won in the 14 ranking tournaments preceding the Tour Championship" - neither of the sources cited confirms this. (Arguably it's implied)
- I think the new wording meets this. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:17, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Tournament draw

Should the seeding numbers in the draw be explained in the intro text?
- Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:30, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Should the parentheses for breaks be explained in the intro text?
- Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:30, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Summary

"It was Brecel's first victory over Trump in a ranking event" - probably worth adding how many times they had played.
- Added Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:30, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Optionally, you could add any comments by Higgins after the final.

Cazoo series

"The top ten players in the Cazoo Cup series are shown below." - what's the source? (The archived source cited before this seems to be an older version, and the unarchived link is dead)
- Changed to a better archive. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:30, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

Inconsistent between World Snooker/World Snooker Tour/wst.tv (Not a required change for GA)
What makes sport-onthebox.com ("run entirely by sports fans and sports broadcasting enthusiasts") a reliable source?
- Removed Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:50, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Some of the BBC Sport refs are missing a publication date. "Higgins to face Robertson in Tour final". BBC Sport. has no dates.
- Added. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 22:26, 21 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"2021–2022 Cazoo Series". Archived from the original on 29 March 2021. Retrieved 27 March 2022. - missing publisher or site
- Added Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:50, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

No issues.

Hi BennyOnTheLoose - that should be all of the items addressed now. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 22:26, 21 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lee Vilenski, there are sStill some duplicate links; otherwise all looks fine. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 14:03, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Apologies. I missed that part - I think I've fixed this, although I the duplink detector looks weird on mobile. :) Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:25, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There's one more, on Gibraltar Open, but as the linked text doesn't have the year at the first instance, seems OK. Passing for GA. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 17:48, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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