Talk:2022 NCAA Beach Volleyball Championship

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 17:29, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

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• ... that the Avengers won the 2022 NCAA Beach Volleyball Championship? Source: Volleyball Magazine: "USC's lineup is akin to Marvel’s Avengers ..."
  • ALT0: ... that the USC Trojans team that won the 2022 NCAA Beach Volleyball Championship had been compared to the Marvel Comics' Avengers?
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/There I Ruined It

Moved to mainspace by Bennv123 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:07, 30 April 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/2022 NCAA Beach Volleyball Championship; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

• Article is new (moved to mainspace on day of nomination), long enough and well sourced. Hooks are correctly formatted, interesting and cited in the article, but ALT0 is easier to understand and closer to the source. QPQ is completed. Sportzeditz (talk) 02:32, 5 May 2023 (UTC)

I appreciate the simplicity of ALT0 and it would make a great This might make a good quirky hook.^(?). I think we may get some pushback on the bait and switch so I will promote ALT1 for now. Bruxton (talk) 17:28, 6 May 2023 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 18:26, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Mostly copy changes to make here. Quality stuff. Ping me when ready. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 19:11, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: Thanks for taking on this review. I think I've addressed all the main points below. Let me know if you still have any concerns and I'll try to address them promptly. Regards. Bennv123 (talk) 02:28, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Copy changes

Encouragement: Consider adding captions to all tables. They make the tables scannable for screen reader users. See MOS:DTAB.

Lead

• The biggest tournament upsets came from the tenth-seeded Georgia State Panthers, who beat the seventh-seeded Grand Canyon Antelopes and the second-seeded TCU Horned Frogs, before being knocked out of the elimination bracket by the Loyola Marymount Lions. Not an appositive; remove the comma after Frogs
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• the Seminoles suffered a loss to USC in the winners bracket, before overcoming the LSU Tigers, Loyola Marymount Lions and UCLA Bruins in the elimination bracket to set up a rematch against the Trojans Remove comma after "winners bracket"
  •  Done
• The final three days of the NCAA championship was attended by a live audience of 10,151, setting a new tournament record. should be "were", not "was", for the plural "days"
  •  Done

Background

• What does "flighted" mean? As someone unfamiliar with this format, I'm a little lost.
  • "Flighted" format here means that the players/pairs are ranked by ability and only compete against those of the same rank in other teams. The "ranks" are then known as "flights". (see definition #4b in merriam-webster.com). The sentence "In an NCAA dual, each team fields..." explains what the "flighted team-dual format" means here. To make that clearer, I combined the sentences as such:

Conversely, NCAA beach volleyball is played using a flighted team-dual format such that in an NCAA dual, each team fields five individual pairs who are ranked from No. 1 to No. 5 by skill level, and each pair plays a best-of-three-set match against their corresponding pair on the other team.

Does this sufficiently address your concern? Alternatively, I could add a footnote with the definition of "flighted".

Teams

• No. 5 and No. 2 seeds respectively Comma after "seeds"
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• Don't hyphenate "top six" here
  •  Done

Dual summaries

• Grand Canyon took an early lead with a straight-set victory at the top pairs flight, before Georgia State evened the dual with a three-set victory at the fourth flight. Remove comma before "before". This comes up a few times here.
  •  Done I think I've removed all instances of this.
• Meanwhile, Florida State was tied 2–2 in their dual against Cal Poly, when their No. 3 pairing of Anna Long and Kate Privett found themselves down 10–12 in the third-set tiebreaker of the deciding match. Remove this comma too. "Before" and "when" start dependent clauses; when second in a two-clause sentence, no punctuation precedes them.
  •  Done
• it was Kraft and Slater's first lost of the season that's "loss"
  •  Done
• Florida State had match points on both courts and their No. 2 pairing of A. Chacon and Fitzpatrick ultimately won their match first to close out the dual Comma after "courts". See User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences (CinS)
• The next round of staggered matches began and USC only needed one more pairs win You need a comma after "began". (CinS)
  •  Done
• "Gruelling" should be grueling, one L, in American English
  •  Done

Broadcast and attendance

• The opening single-elimination round on May 4, 2022, as well as the double-elimination rounds on May 6 were broadcast live on ESPNU. Complete or remove the appositive by adding a comma after 6 or changing "as well as" to "and".
  •  Done
• Hyphenate "seven-percent"
  •  Done

Spot checks

• 3: Since 2016, when the NCAA approved beach volleyball as a championship sport, it has become the fastest-growing collegiate sport in history. The 500% figure is in [2] (As of September 2020, there were 90 intercollegiate programs across the nation, and a 500% increase since 2011 (Next College Student-Athlete, 2020) Y
• 27: USC athletics report: sixth appearance, 32–1 record, Pac-12 championship Y
• 32: Volleyball Magazine article. This one is called a lot for the records of various teams; the USC and UCLA prior titles; USC's winning streak and loss to UCLA; seeds; LSU's record to the other five (only once have they broken through and beaten one of the five teams seeded above them) their 37 combined losses; and GCU as an independent. Y
• 45: Another highly used citation from the same publication. The quotes and facts in here all check out. Y
• 59: FSU match report. This is a dead link, so I changed its status, but the archive checks out. Both courts were at 14 points apiece when Alaina Chacon won the match for the Seminoles 15-9 with a big swing. White and Moon were up 14-10 when the final horn was blown. Y
• 64: In addition to Dorn, Slater, Graudina, Harward, Scoles, Ebertin, Villapando, Schafer, Scully, the Trojans honored graduate transfers Emily Hansen and Paige Hammons, and fifth-year senior Paige Dreeuws. They were all graduating seniors (Dorn having graduated in 2020). Y
• 70: ShowBuzzDaily report of ratings shows 117,000 and 123,000 viewers for the listed matches. Y

Earwig catches quotes and names of paired players that make five- or six-word strings.

Images

• There are seven images. The NCAA Beach Volleyball logo is below TOO. The flyover photo is a screenshot from a PD-USGov video. The others are a variety of CC-licensed images. Encouragement: Add alt text.

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