Talk:2022 24 Hours of Le Mans/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:28, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 15:37, 12 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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Prose

Lede

The 90th 24 Hours of Le Mans - the title doesn't match the bold, so it shouldn't be bold. See MOS:BOLD. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:18, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
France before 244,200 spectators - in front of 244,200 spectators. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:18, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I do think the lede should mention how the event works, other than it just being a motorsport event, it's also teams of drivers. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:18, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General

For the first time in the event's history - a bit puffy, usually we can just say "for the first time". Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
The table for Automatic entries for the 2022 24 Hours of Le Mans - how does this meet MOS:FLAG Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Pre-race balance of performance changes - quite the title - can we simplify? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Why is Toyota Gazoo Racing not bolded in the qualifying results? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:27, 16 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:37, 12 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.