Talk:2020 Treviso Open/GA1

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 18:49, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comma after "The event had a total prize pool of €38,000"
Comma after "The men's event was won by Jayson Shaw"
Switch the first two sentences of the second paragraph for better flow (e.g. defending champion eliminated → new winner)
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Why is the name of the hotel italicized here?
Specify in this section that it's nine-ball pool, which is mentioned in the lede but not in the body
Not a fan of the semi-colon after "double-elimination tournament", as the second half is not actually an independent clause.
Move "7–5" to after "Marharyta Fefilava" rather than at the end of the sentence, for better clarity
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"both of the winners of the event" → "the winner of each event"; otherwise it could be read that there were two winners per event
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:13, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Is it "losers round" or "loser's round"? Both are used at different points
Comma after "Oliwia Zalewska"
Remove comma after "completed two 7–6 victories"
"defeated" used twice in the sentence beginning "Having defeated Bojana Sarac" and is used again in the next sentence. Should use a synonym to break up flow
Per MOS:CAPTION, since it's a complete sentence, the caption should end with a period
No comma needed after "Ouschan won the final"
Hyphen to en dash in the last sentence
- all done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Why is one a "competition" and the other is an "event"?
- fixed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:24, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Work needed in reference [2]
Sometimes a publisher is given for epbf.com, sometimes not
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:27, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

No stability concerns within the revision history
One photo, relevant and properly licensed
Per MOS:IMAGELOCATION, the photo used should probably be on the right side
- I was working on It is often preferable to place images of people so that they "look" toward the text, but do not achieve this by reversing the image, which creates a false presentation, which is why it's on the left, but I can't say I care either way. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:26, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Earwig score looks great at 2.9%

That's all I have! Ping me if you have any questions. — Ghost River 19:01, 23 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

All done GhostRiver. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:31, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to me, thanks! — Ghost River 13:42, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]