Talk:2020 Nashville tornado outbreak/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 19:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
Will do. NoahTalk 19:19, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
including a high-end EF3 tornado that hit Nashville and Mount Juliet
Link EF scale. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)- Done United States Man (talk)
The threat for severe weather across Middle Tennessee and surrounding areas
add "the" before surrounding. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)- Not done I fail to see how this makes the sentence better, as there is no grammatical error the way it is. United States Man (talk)
- Link coordinated universal time on UTC. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
- Done United States Man (talk)
- Link to the central time zone on CST. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
- Done United States Man (talk)
longer-tracked EF2 tornado which tracked across much of Carroll County
I would avoid using tracked twice in the sentence. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)- Done United States Man (talk)
seven miles (11 km)
--> 7 miles (11 km). NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)- Done United States Man (talk)
- will check over the tornado sections and the rest tomorrow. Hopefully the storm events database is back up by then. NoahTalk 01:42, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
- Storm events finally came back online yesterday for me so I was checking things out there. NoahTalk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
Kroger, Panera Bread, Petco
--> Kroger, Panera Bread, and Petco stores. NoahTalk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)The tornado caused five fatalities and 220 injuries
Would recommend changing five to 5. NoahTalk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)- Recommend adding alt text for the other images. NoahTalk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
- That should be it. NoahTalk 12:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)