Talk:2019 Leende Open/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:59, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 15:59, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"who defeated Ruslan Chinakhov in the final 9–7." - 9–7 in the final.
"having defeated Eklent Kaçi 9–8 in the 2018 Leende Open final." - in the final of the 2018 Leende Open.

Tournament format

"Matches were all played as race to 9 racks" - All matches were played as a race
"The tournament prize fund will be similar to that of other Euro Tour events" - was

Tournament Summary

"The event started on 7 February 2019, with matches being played as race to 9 racks, played under the alternative break format." - better The tournament began under the alternative break format on 7 February, with matches being played as a race to 9 racks.
"who then play in a single elimination bracket." - compete
"with specific matches streamed on Facebook." - broadcast
"The previous years winner," - year's

Double Elimination rounds

The second wikilinks for Maximilan Lechner, Mark Gray, Ruslan Chinachov, Imran Majid, Niels Feijen and Joshua Miller are unncessary
"and despite being 8–8 with Michal Turkowski won his first round match 9–8" - although he tied 8–8 with Michal Turkowski, Hohmann
Chris Melling is linked to the rugby league player and not the pool player
"also wouldn't reach the last 32 stage," - did not

Knockout rounds

"played on the 9–10 February 2019." - held between
"before Chinachov scratched on his break" - What is a scratch in pool terms?
"Joshua Filler met Ruslan Chinachov in the final, and featured guest commentary " - which
"that his next goal would be to win the U.S. Open Championship." - his next goal was to win the U.S. Open Championship.
"The win would move Filler up to second in the Euro Tour rankings," - moved Filler to second
"Despite making the final, Chinachov would only move up to 41" - Chinachov only advanced to 41st

References

References 7, 11, 13, 15, 16 are missing the dates they were published and their respective authors
Reference 21 should mention the fact that the source is written in Dutch

Not in too bad of a shape overall. Just these issues are standing in the way of the article becoming a Good Article. MWright96 (talk) 18:07, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, I'll go through this list tomorrow. Thank you for the review. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:03, 4 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed all of the above points. Thanks for your time! Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 08:04, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: Now promoting to GA class. Note that I have made some minor supplementary edits to improve the article. MWright96 (talk) 09:25, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your time, and great review/edits. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 09:38, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]