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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 17:19, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I'll be popping a look over at this! — GhostRiver 17:19, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Lede

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Format

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  • "If there are less than 64 entries" → "If there are fewer than 64 entries", as there is a discrete number rather than a vague amount
  • "two year tour card" → "two-year tour card" for consistency with rest of article

Prize fund

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  • Good

Participants

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  • Good

Summary

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  • Use a script to fix all hyphen/en dash issues
  • Comma after "Brown won the sixth tournament"
  • "17 year old" → "17-year-old"
  • "Hugill who finished the season" → "Hugill, who finished the season"
  • First sentence of the second paragraph is technically a fragment, as there is no active verbs ("won" is part of the modifying clause)

Results

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  • Good

Rankings

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  • Good

References

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  • Alternation between using www.worldsnooker.com, wst.tv, and World Snooker as the work parameters for the same website; suggest using the latter, if for purely aesthetic reasons

General comments

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Putting on hold to allow nominator to address comments. Ping me if there are any questions. — GhostRiver 17:27, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]