Talk:2018 Pacific hurricane season/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 07:34, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
It contains copyright infringements -
It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -

Links

Prose

Lede

Short description? The one on Wikidata is huge! Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Added the standard one from other articles. Noah^Talk 00:55, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Could we fix the first sentence? It doesn't actually say what the article is about Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

What would you suggest? This is similar to other season articles. See 2005 Atlantic hurricane season and 2006 Pacific hurricane season as examples. Noah^Talk 16:12, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Does "most-active" mean most named storms? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Changed the sentence. Noah^Talk 00:55, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

(Bud, Olivia, Nineteen-E, Rosa, Walaka, Sergio, Vicente, and Willa) - seems like general prose info. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Axed that bit. Noah^Talk 16:22, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The season officially began on May 15 in the eastern Pacific, and on June 1 in the central Pacific; they both ended on November 30 - this is cited - can we cite in body instead? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Noah^Talk 01:13, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Have we got a link for Category 5? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:41, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Added. Noah^Talk 00:55, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

General

Might need to come up with a better style for the subsections in "systems" (maybe by location or month), and use {{TOC limit}}. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:44, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

This can't be done without consensus as it would affect every season article worldwide. Noah^Talk 15:59, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I feel the article (like the lead) is missing a senetnce/paragraph about what the article is about. We can't just expect readers to know what we are talking about from the title. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:44, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Addressing this at the first mention above. Noah^Talk 01:16, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

near- to above-average season - is this a quote? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:44, 18 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is changed from the source a bit. Noah^Talk 01:16, 19 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Review meta comments

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:34, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]