Talk:2018 Mexico City ePrix/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:19, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
- Reviewing shortly. Courcelles (talk) 00:19, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
- "and held on to it " "and he held onto it"?
- "over Rosenqvist who later ended his race prematurely because he did not have enough electrical energy to complete all 47 laps. " Don't think we need this "later"?
- "both got out of shape." What does this mean in this context?
- "of the Turvey's car." Lose the 'the'
- Good work. Courcelles (talk) 00:44, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: The four points raised above have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 05:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)
- Promoted. Courcelles (talk) 14:59, 24 July 2018 (UTC)