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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 00:19, 24 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]


  • "and held on to it " "and he held onto it"?
  • "over Rosenqvist who later ended his race prematurely because he did not have enough electrical energy to complete all 47 laps. " Don't think we need this "later"?
  • "both got out of shape." What does this mean in this context?
  • "of the Turvey's car." Lose the 'the'