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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 11:05, 7 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]


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That's it from me on a run-through. I'll put the article on hold while we go over these. Cheers. The Rambling Man (REJOICE!) 09:53, 12 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Further comments

  • Dafabet not mentioned in the prose, suggest you add something about them being the primary sponsors.
Added a bit about this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:29, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm still not convinced that (revision 6) is useful or accessible to our readers.
Yeah, I'll remove Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:29, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Check the format of "World Snooker" or world snooker in the refs...
I looked through them all, I think this is uniform now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:29, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:54, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

 Done The Rambling Man Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:29, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Alrighty then Lee, I removed a few of the "just"s which are better suited to tabloid, but otherwise, I'm satisfied, so promoting. Good work. Let's keep applying all these changes to the next ones I review, I think I got the 2019 Austria Open next... The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:53, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
No worries mate. I think I did quite a few fixes for that one, but going to go through it again one more time in a mo. Thanks for your time, and excellent reviewing once again. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 17:10, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]