Talk:2017 Hong Kong ePrix/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

• Giving this one a read. Courcelles (talk) 21:19, 4 August 2018 (UTC)

• "He held through the mandatory pit stop" Held what through?
• "Mortara then battled Heidfeld in what he thought was for position but was told over the radio that this was not the case" Was Heidfeld already a lap down or something?
• Both infoboxes say attendance 27,000. Are figures available for each race? If not, those figures should be removed.
• "Off the podium, Engel originally finished fourth but was penalised with a time penalty for overusing energy and dropped to 14th.[36] Thus Piquet finished fourth, Abt came fifth, Félix da Costa took sixth and Mortara was the highest-placed rookie in seventh.[31] Rosenqvist lost his eighth-place result after being adjudged to have overused power and dropped to 14th." How can they both be dropped into 14th?

• Through race 1. Courcelles (talk) 00:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)

• "14th to ninth by the start of the fifth lap." Don't mix number formats in a sentence like this.
• "Jani said that had been quite" it had?
• Quality work, nothing but nitpicks here. Courcelles (talk) 05:11, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
  • @Courcelles: My thanks for another review. Everything that has been raised has been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 07:41, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
    • Promoted to GA. Courcelles (talk) 07:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)