Talk:2016 Qatar motorcycle Grand Prix/GA1
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 08:28, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
- Doing this one. Courcelles (talk) 08:28, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
- "Iannone retook the lead by forcing Dovizioso off the racing line at turn one, but he was successful at the fifth corner" If he got the lead at turn 1, what happened in the fifth corner?
- "the début appearance of 2014 Moto2 World Champion Esteve Rabat on one of the two Marc VDS Racing bikes with which he won the title" The 2016 season title? Also needs sourcing.
- "The two sessions lasted fifteen minutes" Total or each?
- "He retired." Maybe integrate the two word sentence into the prior one?
- "dislocated his shoulders in a qualifying accident at turn two." Both of them? That's quite a crash.
- "Folger was the pre-race favourite" Needs sourcing
Just not much wrong here. On hold. Courcelles (talk) 08:57, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Have made all of the necessary edits as well as some of my own. MWright96 (talk) 12:25, 5 August 2018 (UTC)
- Okay, happy to promote. Courcelles (talk) 16:43, 5 August 2018 (UTC)