Talk:2016 Monaco Grand Prix/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this one as part of backlog drive. MWright96 (talk) 11:47, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- Remove the second link to Formula One
- Done
Background
[edit]- FIA should be spelt out in full since its mentioned once
- Link Drivers' Championship to List of Formula One World Drivers' Champions
- It would be appropriate to link Constructors' standings to List of Formula One World Constructors' Champions
- Daniel Ricciardo is linked twice, remove the second link
- All Done
Free practice
[edit]- "two ninety-minute practice and one sixty-minute session were held before qualifying on Saturday." - change to 90-minute and 60-minute
- The way it is now is well within the regulations of WP:NUMNOTES.
- "in order to minimize road-closure disruptions to local residents." - change to Minimise
- Done
- Remove the Sebastian Vettel and Lewis Hamilton wikilinks
- Done Removed all duplinks in the article
Qualifying
[edit]- "all drivers except for the Force Indias went out on the ultrasoft tyres to set their first lap times." - can be either Force India cars or drivers
- Done
- " it were the two Manors of Rio Haryanto and Pascal Wehrlein," - ditto
- Done
- Delink Max Verstappen, Joylon Palmer, Jenson Button and Rio Haryanto as all four men are linked in the earlier Free Practice sub-section
- Same for Felipe Massa, Valtteri Bottas, Kimi Räikkönen, Fernando Alonso, Romain Grosjean, and Williams
Race
[edit]- All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport slang
- Done
- "for intermediates over the following laps." - intermediate tyres
- Done
- "Another VSC period was called while both Saubers pitted to repair damages," - change to either Sauber cars or drivers
- Done
- Remove the link to the 2008 race since its linked in the background sub-section
Post-race
[edit]- Delink Toto Wolff as he is linked in the background sub-section
- "since his slower pace was due to low temperatures in his tyres." - I believe rewording it low tyre temperatures would be better
- Done
That's what I found. On hold MWright96 (talk) 14:38, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you for your review! I believe it is all taken care of. Zwerg Nase (talk) 13:24, 5 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Yes it has. Promoted to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 13:45, 5 August 2016 (UTC)