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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:29, 25 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • 263,500 people attended the event. can be reworded as The event was attended by 263,500 people.

Background

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  • No issues

Circuit changes

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  • No issues

Entries

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  • No issues

Garage 56

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  • No issues

Debutants

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  • No issues

Reserves

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  • Why did TDS Racing withdraw ?

Qualifying

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  • No issues

Race

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  • Conway overtook Bernhard on the way into the first Mulsanne Chicane for second and took the lead from Bernhard at the eighth lap's conclusion. How can Conway pass Bernhard for both first and second .
  • Four hours and fifty minutes in Rao spun at the Dunlop Chicane. can be reworded to Four hours and fifty minutes into the race , Rao spun at the Dunlop Chicane.

Comments

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@MWright96: Sorry for rhos taking such a long time. The article is very good and these fixes will bring it to GA status. Kpgjhpjm 13:00, 13 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]