Talk:2015 Vuelta a España/GA1
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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 08:47, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
Glad to review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:47, 30 September 2015 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
An exquisitly written article on this year's Vuelta. I made several minor changes myself which leaves only minor things to do:
- The the last paragraph of the lead, I feel the wording should be slightly changed. At the moment it sounds like Valverde won the classification on the last stage alone. Maybe better: was decided during?
- Pre-race favorites: last paragraphs: I feel it is quite the generalized statement to assume that all sprinters were preparing for the WC.
- Caption for the stage 11 photo: It might have been the most difficult stage, but that is not an objective statement.
- Any chance for a source on the mountain points?
That's about it. Great work! I put it on hold for now. Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:58, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, Zwerg Nase. How does that look? Relentlessly (talk) 20:51, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
- Excellent! Another one off the list :) Congrats! Zwerg Nase (talk) 22:27, 3 October 2015 (UTC)