Talk:2015–16 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:26, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

I will review this. MWright96 (talk) 06:26, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• no dab links

Lead

• "the team was coming off of an offseason which saw Spike Albrecht and Zak Irvin have surgeries." - remove the word "of"
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:06, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "The Wolveriens finished the season 23–13." - Wolverines
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:06, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

2015-16 recruits

• Delink Germany per WP:OVERLINK
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:07, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

2016-17

• "who lived in Grand Rapids, Michigan suburb Grandville until he was 10 and his family moved to Medina, Ohio," - missing the word "the" inbetween "in" and "Grand"
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:09, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

2017-18

• Remove the link for Caris LeVert and added into the previous sub-section.
  • Moved link forward.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:16, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "four-star recruit Jordan Poole became the first commitment for the Class of 2017 after home gym visit from Beilein and assistant coach Jordan and multiple Michigan campus visits." - after a home gym visit
  • Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:16, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Preseason

• "Bleacher Report ranked Michigan at 25 noting lower expectations if he declared." - Declared for what?
  • clarified.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:19, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Schedule

• "The 2015–16 academic year marks 150 years of intercollegiate athletics for the Michigan Wolverines and the 100th season of intercollegiate men's basketball for Michigan Wolverines men's basketball." - Since the season has ended, its best to use the past tense here.
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "Michigan will play Penn State at the Madison Square Garden on January 30, 2016 as part of "Big Ten Day"," - played
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:38, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

November

• Remove the wikilink to Zak Irvin as he is already linked earlier in the article.
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:53, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "Before beginning the 2015 Battle 4 Atlantis in Nassau, BS," - It should be Nassau, Bahamas or just Nassau
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:53, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "On November 25, Michigan lost to (#18 AP Poll/#21 Coaches Poll) Connecticut at the Battle 4 Atlantis." - This could be cleaner. How about On November 25, Michigan lost to Connecticut, who were ranked 18th in the AP Poll and 21st in the Coaches Poll, at the Battle 4 Alantis.?
  • I don't know about this. Then there are a number of subsequent changes that would have to be made. It would also call into question the formatting for several of the preceding seasons.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:53, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
    • Let's leave this point for now. MWright96 (talk) 14:21, 16 August 2016 (UTC)

December

• You don't need to spell out Duncan Robinson's name in full here.
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:58, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• "that any team has posted back-to-back triple doubles and the first time by different players." - had
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:58, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

January

• Add an hyphen for double double for consistency
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:17, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
• What is B1G?
  • It is a stylization of the Big Ten Conference.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:17, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

March

• "the team announced that LeVert will sit out the remainder of the season to concentrate on his continued recovery after suffering a lower left leg injury at the end of December." - would
  • Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:23, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Postseason

• " Notre Dame didn't take a lead" - did not
  • O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 23:25, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

References

• References 10, 88, 156 are dead Can they be archived?
  • Two removed as redundant and the third replaced by other refs.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 01:41, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
• Citations 169, 181, 182, 186, 187, 188 have a different date format than the remainder of the sources.
  • Dates fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:29, 16 August 2016 (UTC)

On hold until the above points have been dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 10:38, 14 August 2016 (UTC)

• • I see everything has been sorted. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 14:21, 16 August 2016 (UTC)

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