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Good article2014 National League Wild Card Game has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
February 1, 2015Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on October 11, 2014.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that in the 2014 National League Wild Card Game, Brandon Crawford hit the first Major League Baseball postseason grand slam by a shortstop?

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:23, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 17:23, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "coming from behind to win 3–1 after dropping Game 1" I'd say three games to one (and later in the section three games to two), since I had to re-read it a couple times to realize it wasn't a score.
  • "This was done in an effort to pip the Cardinals to the NL Central division title, rather than simply settling for the wild card spot." Reads oddly; reword.
  • "seventh NLDS appearance in franchise history, since the permanent implementation" rm comma

Only a bit to fix; article on hold. Wizardman 18:08, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

All 3 comments addressed. However, if you find the reworded sentence still awkward, I'm more than happy to change it again to something completely different. Thanks for the review! —Bloom6132 (talk) 17:42, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I tweaked one of them, but otherwise everything looks good, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 22:03, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]