Talk:2014 Emirates Cup/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 21:50, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

• I'll take this one on tonight. Courcelles (talk) 21:50, 30 January 2018 (UTC)

• "the competition's inaugural edition was attended by over 110,000 people across the two days.[3]" Relevance to this edition?

• Removed and merged the first sentence with the other paragraph.

• "and Ligue 1 side Monaco" Why leave out the nationality for this one team?

• Tweaked this.

• "Monaco coach Leonardo Jardim fielded an expensively assembled team" Source for "expensively"?
• "which included midfielders João Moutinho and Geoffrey Kondogbia, and striker Falcao on the substitutes' bench." Reads like all three were substitutes? Is this accurate?

• Yes, tweaked sentence

• Also, in that sentence, the link for Falcao goes to a dab page.
• We have whole paragraphs for the day 1 games, yet almost nothing for the day 2 games, these need expanding, should be able to write a nice paragraph about both games that day.

• Split into two and reordered

• Attendance for day 1?

• Searched high and low, I think the club never did release the attendance figures.

• "The competition follows a point scoring system much like the Amsterdam Tournament," Relevance for mentioning this in lede, when you don't mention Amsterdam again?
• "Yaya Sanogo was the tournament's topscorer, with four goals." Topscorer isn't one word, I don't think.
• Images are appropriately licensed, page is stable.

That's it for me. Courcelles (talk) 17:18, 31 January 2018 (UTC)

• Pinging @Lemonade51: Courcelles (talk) 19:53, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

• Thanks for being patient @Courcelles:, have addressed all your comments. Lemonade51 (talk) 23:45, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

• Okay, then, passing. Courcelles (talk) 01:00, 3 February 2018 (UTC)