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Reviewer: Harrias (talk · contribs) 10:35, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Right then. Harrias talk 10:35, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
Circuit and regulation changes
Entries
Testing and practice
  • "Toyota set the pace of the day with a three minutes and 23.014 seconds lap set by Buemi.." Repetition of "set".
  • "..in the second session, followed by Nakajima in the No. 7 Toyota in second. The No. 3 Audi of Marco Bonanomi was within a second of the top time, while the fastest Porsche was over a second and a half behind Buemi's lap." Immediately followed by this, which repeats "second" (in two meanings) quite a few times quickly. Might be largely unavoidable, but if it can be adjusted, that'd be great.
Qualifying
Race
References
  • All look good, checks reveal no evidence of copyvio or close para-phrasing.

Overall, another good piece of work, that I'll stick on hold. Harrias talk 11:32, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Harrias: Okay. I have made adjustments where possible and have replied where possible to your queries. MWright96 (talk) 15:39, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your quick work on this one, it all looks good to me now. Harrias talk 21:27, 11 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]