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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:03, 2 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • but He -> but he - H in lowercase
  • his startline advantage to the advantage
  • Typo in Coletti's name

Background

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  • Medium was identified by yellow stripes and hard by orange - what about soft tyres and medium tyres were not mentioned in the previous line about tyre allocation .

Practice and Qualifying

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  • Change driver who won the pole position to driver who won the pole position and his team and and Team's Championship to and Team's Championship respectively .
  • Team names in brackets are not required .
  • Remove the bracketed words after Sam Bird's name .
  • Remove the brackets after Fabio Leimar's name and write like this Fabio Leimar of Racing Engineering .
  • Was the four seconds faster lap that Coletti set was that one minute 44.280 lap . ? If yes , ping me and I will tell the modifications.
  • Change the track's final sector to the final sector of the track
  • What is meant by Nasr usurped him ?
  • No need for the bracketed team names .

Feature Race

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  • In slalom past the middle of Calado and Nasr , remove the words - the middle of
  • There is possibly a typo in Ericsson's name .
  • Why did the field slow into turn 9 ? If it was for braking, you could write braked into turn nine .
  • Didn't a yellow come out after either incident ?
  • and they retired after contact to and both of them retired after making contact with each other .
  • Change Coletti struggled with his soft compound tyres degrading to Colleti struggled as his soft tyres were degrading .
  • Move Leimar's pitting sentence after the sentence describing Abt's incident.
  • Why did Evans and Richelmi put themselves wide ?
  • Is the Dillmann swerving sentence and the Evans running wide sentence separate sentences . If yes , add a full stop between them .

Sprint race

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  • The sentence describing Nasr having space can reworded to As a result, his teammate Nasr used the vacant spot left by his teammate Palmer to get ahead ...
  • There has been a repetation in the word ran .

Comments

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